Wednesday, March 8, 2023

The "long-awaited" script

     I finally managed to finish my script!  There's some things about it that may still need Tweaking but for the most part it's pretty set.  I feel like my biggest struggle with this was definitely writing the dialogue and trying to make sure it fit the characters and also explained what was going on in the story clearly since this idea is kind of a lot.  I hope to get some of my friends to peer review my script and hopefully give some suggestions on how to make it better.  I just want to make sure that someone who is not me can understand what's going on in the script.  I wanted to make the characters have more weird and goofy to show that this is supposed to be fun and enjoyable, but also deals with very heavy and dark subject matter.  Many people use humor as a coping mechanism so I wanted to reflect that trait of Vincente's within the script.  I'm also just not the best at writing dialogue, so I'm also kind of making fun of that fact within the script so the dialogue is purposefully kind of stupid and whimsical.



(I'm not sure why the text is so blurry but you will have to cope with these pictures until I figure out how to make them ... not blurry)


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